I don't know where I was selected (1st-last-anywhere between) but as a first-timer, I must have loaded the box with sufficient evidence of my capabilities and suitability for commission.
So with an understanding that each of us is different and unique, I'll offer up what my package generally looked like in hopes that it may help others with future endeavors. I think that in addition to experience, demonstrating efforts to consistently go above and beyond the norm helped me get noticed. If you have an opportunity to contribute to your community, (military, professional, local or otherwise) get out there. AND make sure you articulate it in your package.
Things I articulated in my Motivational Statement include:
· Prior active enlisted.
· Re-enlisted a year ago as an Advance Pay Grade MC1 (after a 15-year gap) to demonstrate my commitment to the Navy PA community. The day after I enlisted, I called my Community Manger and Detailer to get assigned to a high profile unit and eventually received orders to a forward deployed unit (NAVCENT/Commander, 5th Fleet)
· Contacted the active command and scheduled an AT before my orders were even processed
· Knocked out my APG requirements (9 correspondence courses and pass the rating exam) in 30% of the allowed time.
· Completed a successful, forward deployed AT to 5th Fleet last summer and just completed another one yesterday (scheduled before and noted in my package.) Both received outstanding PIMs from the active command.
Other elements of my package included:
ASTB
53/6/7/7
Education
1998 B.S. Public Relations, University of Florida (3.5 GPA)
Volunteering/Associations
Town Planning and Zoning Commission (Member)
SEAL Recruiting District Advisory Council (Proctor/Mentor)
Local Library (Logistics and event coordination)
Society of Marketing Professional Services (member)
Society of American Military Engineers (member)
U.S. Naval Institute (member)
Charitable fraternity (member)
Experience
1988-1994U.S. Navy Active Enlisted
1996-1998 Special Events Coordinator for a non-profit
· Managed two national awareness campaigns, each with a $1 million budget
1998-2000 Public Relations Specialist/Media Buyer for a small advertising, marketing and PR firm
· Media Account Exec for three national retail accounts
· B2B PR Account Exec for marine and automotive accounts
· PR Account Exec for international aerospace manufacturer
2000-Present International 150-person, $100 million defense contractor
· Marketing and Communications Coordinator
· Marketing and Communications Manager
· Director, Federal Program Development
· Vice President, Business Development
· Sr. Vice President, Program Development
2009-Present U.S. Navy Reserve Mass Communication Specialist
Fitness
Scored "Outstanding" on both 2009 PFAs
Letters of Recommendation
1. Retired Army 0-6 (co-worker)
2. Active USMC 0-4 (USMC OIC for NOTC at the time)
3. Navy Active O-4 (my NOSC CO)
4. Navy Reserve 0-6 (Medical Corps)
5. Active Army/Guard O-3 (former co-worker)
6. Employer CEO
Officer Community Interviews
1. Reserve O-6 PAO
2. Reserve O-6 PAO
3. Reserve 0-5 PAO (my unit CO)
4. Active 0-5 PAO (my active component unit CO)
Hope it helps by at least showing the level of detail.
Good Luck!