Age: 25
Service: 4 years active duty
Occupation: IS2 (AW) (made in under 2 years)
Education: BS Business Management 3.87 GPA . 6 Credit hours towards a Masters in Strategic Intelligence 3.75 GPA. IS "A" School 92.1 GPA (3rd). IS "C" School 95 GPA (3rd)
ASTB: 48, 4 4 4
LOR's: Intel GG-15, Intel GG-14, Intel 1 Star General (Army retired), Pilot 0-4 (My divo), Major (Army and family friend), Lawyer 0-6.
Interviews: three Intel 0-3's (10's), one Intel 0-4 (10's).
One 0-6 Intel inteview scheduled in next couple of weeks.
CO Interview scheduled after this.
Applying for: Intel and IW
Evals: MP's and EP's all well above summary group average.
PFA: 100 - OUTSTANDING HIGH
Collateral Duties: Assistant Squadron Duty Officer. Anti-terrorism Force Protection Officer. Assistant Tactical Publications Librarian. Command Fitness Leader. Intel LPO. CPR Instructor.
Volunteer: over 160 hours in 4 years
My motivational statement needs some work. On the form it says between 200-250, can I go over? Any help will be greatly appreciated I'm open to constructive criticism, if it sucks please tell me.
I am ready for the responsibility that comes with a commission! The opportunity to serve as an Intelligence Officer will provide me with the opportunity to save lives overseas and at home. My cousin, Captain Christopher J. Adams, was killed in the Khobar Towers bombings. Walter Travers, a stock trader and my second cousin, was killed in the second World Trade Center attacks.
While my life-long ambition has always been to be a Naval Officer, these events have driven me to seek a commission as an Intelligence Officer. Prior to my enlistment as an Intelligence Specialist, I did not have the grades to become an officer. I hope that completing 54 credit hours and improving my GPA to a 3.87 while on active duty has proven my dedication towards becoming an officer.
My immediate goal after becoming an Intelligence Officer is to continue to fight the GWOT, and build on my intelligence background by finishing my Masters degree in Strategic Intelligence. My ultimate goal is to be a Commanding Officer at an intelligence command and build effective leaders as I advance through the ranks. Additionally, I am prepared to accept any assignment the Navy offers to me.
I have all of the necessary skills required to be an effective Intelligence Officer. From November through December 2007 I performed my duties as Intelligence LPO and acted as the squadron Intel officer for a P-3 squadron and a reserve squadron! Additionally, my hard work resulted in the selection for Junior Sailor of the Quarter (spring 2008) and runner up for Intelligence Specialist of the year for the entire MPRA community! I have the experience, leadership and drive that the Navy is looking for. I am ready for this new challenge!
Service: 4 years active duty
Occupation: IS2 (AW) (made in under 2 years)
Education: BS Business Management 3.87 GPA . 6 Credit hours towards a Masters in Strategic Intelligence 3.75 GPA. IS "A" School 92.1 GPA (3rd). IS "C" School 95 GPA (3rd)
ASTB: 48, 4 4 4
LOR's: Intel GG-15, Intel GG-14, Intel 1 Star General (Army retired), Pilot 0-4 (My divo), Major (Army and family friend), Lawyer 0-6.
Interviews: three Intel 0-3's (10's), one Intel 0-4 (10's).
One 0-6 Intel inteview scheduled in next couple of weeks.
CO Interview scheduled after this.
Applying for: Intel and IW
Evals: MP's and EP's all well above summary group average.
PFA: 100 - OUTSTANDING HIGH
Collateral Duties: Assistant Squadron Duty Officer. Anti-terrorism Force Protection Officer. Assistant Tactical Publications Librarian. Command Fitness Leader. Intel LPO. CPR Instructor.
Volunteer: over 160 hours in 4 years
My motivational statement needs some work. On the form it says between 200-250, can I go over? Any help will be greatly appreciated I'm open to constructive criticism, if it sucks please tell me.
I am ready for the responsibility that comes with a commission! The opportunity to serve as an Intelligence Officer will provide me with the opportunity to save lives overseas and at home. My cousin, Captain Christopher J. Adams, was killed in the Khobar Towers bombings. Walter Travers, a stock trader and my second cousin, was killed in the second World Trade Center attacks.
While my life-long ambition has always been to be a Naval Officer, these events have driven me to seek a commission as an Intelligence Officer. Prior to my enlistment as an Intelligence Specialist, I did not have the grades to become an officer. I hope that completing 54 credit hours and improving my GPA to a 3.87 while on active duty has proven my dedication towards becoming an officer.
My immediate goal after becoming an Intelligence Officer is to continue to fight the GWOT, and build on my intelligence background by finishing my Masters degree in Strategic Intelligence. My ultimate goal is to be a Commanding Officer at an intelligence command and build effective leaders as I advance through the ranks. Additionally, I am prepared to accept any assignment the Navy offers to me.
I have all of the necessary skills required to be an effective Intelligence Officer. From November through December 2007 I performed my duties as Intelligence LPO and acted as the squadron Intel officer for a P-3 squadron and a reserve squadron! Additionally, my hard work resulted in the selection for Junior Sailor of the Quarter (spring 2008) and runner up for Intelligence Specialist of the year for the entire MPRA community! I have the experience, leadership and drive that the Navy is looking for. I am ready for this new challenge!