Improving My OCS Package

[Ken_gone_flying]

I don't know if this has been highlighted, but would there be any misperceptions if the writer gives lots of "!!!!!" on his statement. It's good to show the board that you are enthusiastic and sincere, but would too much be a bad thing?

I was just asking because there was an example motivational statement in the archives where the OCS applicant wrote "This is where I belong!" on his statement and the board came to the conclusion that he belonged in the non-select category.

I would agree with that. Let your words show your enthusiasm, not your puncuation.