ZekeBathory
Doe-eyed Hopeful
Good afternoon, gentlemen.
I'm a former enlisted Marine and Naval aviation buff. It's been a few years since I've lurked on this forum, but it's still as interesting as it was when I first stumbled upon it. I envy you all and I'm a little embarrassed to admit I am not a man of officer-caliber, let alone a man that belongs in a cockpit.
I'm writing my first post here to make a special -- and probably unique -- request. I'm something of a writer in my spare time. When I'm not working as a lowly manager at a liquor store or cleaning up my little apartment, I toy with stories and one of has been on the back burner for the last few years.
The world doesn't need another Top Gun or Stealth, so I'd like some technical and cultural advisement when writing my fantasy short story about a nugget lieutenant who is under investigation for ejecting over the Pacific on a routine flight. The investigating officer turns up more and more evidence that connects the incident with local Hawaiian legends of dragons. The implication, of course, being that the pilot was harassed by a dragon and it's up to the investigator to find out whether or not the pilot is crazy and at fault -- or if there is actually a dragon out dogfighting with the locals.
I plan on finishing this story before the end of June. What I would like most is input from authentic Naval aviators to prevent my story from becoming some over-simplistic piece of Hollywood wankery. I will not ask for or use any details that are not otherwise available to the public.
I'll write the story, you folks tell me how to make the pilots more real and less like Saturday morning cartoon characters.
Anyone interested?
Thanks for your time,
ZB
I'm a former enlisted Marine and Naval aviation buff. It's been a few years since I've lurked on this forum, but it's still as interesting as it was when I first stumbled upon it. I envy you all and I'm a little embarrassed to admit I am not a man of officer-caliber, let alone a man that belongs in a cockpit.
I'm writing my first post here to make a special -- and probably unique -- request. I'm something of a writer in my spare time. When I'm not working as a lowly manager at a liquor store or cleaning up my little apartment, I toy with stories and one of has been on the back burner for the last few years.
The world doesn't need another Top Gun or Stealth, so I'd like some technical and cultural advisement when writing my fantasy short story about a nugget lieutenant who is under investigation for ejecting over the Pacific on a routine flight. The investigating officer turns up more and more evidence that connects the incident with local Hawaiian legends of dragons. The implication, of course, being that the pilot was harassed by a dragon and it's up to the investigator to find out whether or not the pilot is crazy and at fault -- or if there is actually a dragon out dogfighting with the locals.
I plan on finishing this story before the end of June. What I would like most is input from authentic Naval aviators to prevent my story from becoming some over-simplistic piece of Hollywood wankery. I will not ask for or use any details that are not otherwise available to the public.
I'll write the story, you folks tell me how to make the pilots more real and less like Saturday morning cartoon characters.
Anyone interested?
Thanks for your time,
ZB