Nicholas Ladolcetta
Well-Known Member
Was considering posting this to the motivational statement mega thread but it does have it's own category. It may be weird coming here for help but I've reached out to other resources as well. Just thought many over here can provide some insight as well.
In short, I was an SNA, who was attrited academically after completing API. I passed the tests, did phys, then was dropped for a low NSS during a force reduction. I did all my homework, rubbed a lot of elbows, and found out my last chance at military flight (if any of you have any other ideas....please....) is through the army flight warrant officer program.
Part of my packet is this "why I want to be an Army Aviator" essay. To anyone who feels they can help, please look it over and let me know what you think. Some bullets on what they're looking for:
-brevity
-no fluff. To a point where the essay could seem grammatically incorrect. Based on the other essay I've seen I think my final paragraph can be cut
- reasons why i want to fly, but no golly gee, flying is cool kind of thing.
- and of course, what about my would make a good pilot, what about me would make a good fit for the army.
My last question....As I said earlier, I attrited academically. The board will have memos, and LORs from staff at NASC discussing my attrition. I felt this essay I can keep generic and not touch on this topic.
Any other critiques, please let me know, AND TO APPLICANTS, if you have any questions about anything i discussed or anything at all you think I can help with, please let me know. Right now I am in Pensacola waiting for my discharge paperwork.
Here's my essay. Keep in mind....it's a why I want to be an Army Aviator essay.....I have no choice but to act like the Army is the best place in the world to fly.
During my undergraduate experience, I excelled in a wide range of activities; resulting in leadership, time management, and administrative skills development. As Senior Class President, Vice President of the Sigma Pi Fraternity International, chair holder for the campus Judicial Board and Morale Captain for the largest student run philanthropic organization in the country, THON, I was entrusted with a large amount of leadership responsibility to balance with my academics. My undergraduate career culminated in a 3.8 GPA, and resulted in acceptance into a graduate level program.
After graduation, I enlisted into the United States Army. In less than two years, I have earned the Army Commendation Medal, two Army Achievement Medals, Combat Action Badge, Air Assault Badge, and graduated both with academic honors, and with the Iron Man Award as the top physical graduate in the Army Basic Leader Course. I was hand-selected by my commander to represent my unit in the national Best Warrior Competition, which measured leadership, mental grit, military fundamentals, and most importantly my ability to handle pressure with sound judgment, all characteristics of a strong Aviator. After placing second in my division, I decided it was time to take my military career to the next level with my newly honed skills.
What I love most about the Army, is it’s revolution around the most essential element of war, the soldiers on the ground. Despite my personal experiences, possibly my most inspirational moments were listening to infantrymen tell stories of their darkest moments in hostile territory, only coming to a positive ending through aviation support. After attempting to enter Army Flight as an Active Guard Reserve Commissioned Officer, only to have my slot taken from me, I was anxious to enter the military flight community as quickly as possible, and applied for Navy Flight. I fell in love with the community, but I believe my career as an Aviator could not be better fulfilled anywhere else other than the Army. I could not believe any stronger that infantrymen are the bravest people in the world. I cannot think of a more fulfilling and meaningful career, than helping them accomplish their mission, as well as ensuring their safe return home to their families.
My diverse education and experiences have given me an adept mental agility. My biggest fear is becoming stagnant, and limiting my realm of knowledge and aspirations. Because of this thought, I always strive to diversify myself in all aspects of my life. By remaining highly motivated and competitive, I have developed skills that can be an asset in the right environment. The diversity of the Army and its missions make it the ideal environment for which I will be carrying out my duties as an Army Aviator.
In short, I was an SNA, who was attrited academically after completing API. I passed the tests, did phys, then was dropped for a low NSS during a force reduction. I did all my homework, rubbed a lot of elbows, and found out my last chance at military flight (if any of you have any other ideas....please....) is through the army flight warrant officer program.
Part of my packet is this "why I want to be an Army Aviator" essay. To anyone who feels they can help, please look it over and let me know what you think. Some bullets on what they're looking for:
-brevity
-no fluff. To a point where the essay could seem grammatically incorrect. Based on the other essay I've seen I think my final paragraph can be cut
- reasons why i want to fly, but no golly gee, flying is cool kind of thing.
- and of course, what about my would make a good pilot, what about me would make a good fit for the army.
My last question....As I said earlier, I attrited academically. The board will have memos, and LORs from staff at NASC discussing my attrition. I felt this essay I can keep generic and not touch on this topic.
Any other critiques, please let me know, AND TO APPLICANTS, if you have any questions about anything i discussed or anything at all you think I can help with, please let me know. Right now I am in Pensacola waiting for my discharge paperwork.
Here's my essay. Keep in mind....it's a why I want to be an Army Aviator essay.....I have no choice but to act like the Army is the best place in the world to fly.
During my undergraduate experience, I excelled in a wide range of activities; resulting in leadership, time management, and administrative skills development. As Senior Class President, Vice President of the Sigma Pi Fraternity International, chair holder for the campus Judicial Board and Morale Captain for the largest student run philanthropic organization in the country, THON, I was entrusted with a large amount of leadership responsibility to balance with my academics. My undergraduate career culminated in a 3.8 GPA, and resulted in acceptance into a graduate level program.
After graduation, I enlisted into the United States Army. In less than two years, I have earned the Army Commendation Medal, two Army Achievement Medals, Combat Action Badge, Air Assault Badge, and graduated both with academic honors, and with the Iron Man Award as the top physical graduate in the Army Basic Leader Course. I was hand-selected by my commander to represent my unit in the national Best Warrior Competition, which measured leadership, mental grit, military fundamentals, and most importantly my ability to handle pressure with sound judgment, all characteristics of a strong Aviator. After placing second in my division, I decided it was time to take my military career to the next level with my newly honed skills.
What I love most about the Army, is it’s revolution around the most essential element of war, the soldiers on the ground. Despite my personal experiences, possibly my most inspirational moments were listening to infantrymen tell stories of their darkest moments in hostile territory, only coming to a positive ending through aviation support. After attempting to enter Army Flight as an Active Guard Reserve Commissioned Officer, only to have my slot taken from me, I was anxious to enter the military flight community as quickly as possible, and applied for Navy Flight. I fell in love with the community, but I believe my career as an Aviator could not be better fulfilled anywhere else other than the Army. I could not believe any stronger that infantrymen are the bravest people in the world. I cannot think of a more fulfilling and meaningful career, than helping them accomplish their mission, as well as ensuring their safe return home to their families.
My diverse education and experiences have given me an adept mental agility. My biggest fear is becoming stagnant, and limiting my realm of knowledge and aspirations. Because of this thought, I always strive to diversify myself in all aspects of my life. By remaining highly motivated and competitive, I have developed skills that can be an asset in the right environment. The diversity of the Army and its missions make it the ideal environment for which I will be carrying out my duties as an Army Aviator.