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Does "Reason for applying" weigh heavily?
- Thread starter jpham79
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Why would that matter?
lol. Good question. You can tell I'm a noob.
In the name of all that is holy, please tell me you sensed a little bit of sarcasm in that response? Please?
Ok
LOL. Ok I really have a lot to learn. But anyhow...
A small reason of why I want to apply is because my dad was in the vietnamese navy, as well as my Uncle. Granted it wasn't the U.S. navy, I do get a sense of following in their naval footsteps, so to speak. This comes across to me as somewhat of a bad reason, even though it is only a small part. Is it advisable to mention this at all.
LOL. Ok I really have a lot to learn. But anyhow...
A small reason of why I want to apply is because my dad was in the vietnamese navy, as well as my Uncle. Granted it wasn't the U.S. navy, I do get a sense of following in their naval footsteps, so to speak. This comes across to me as somewhat of a bad reason, even though it is only a small part. Is it advisable to mention this at all.
jpham, thats an interesting heritage.. it can't hurt to mention. Got any cool vietnamese navy stories to pass on from your father?
thull
Well-Known Member
2nd that. sounds like something you COULD turn into a pretty classy short essay if you word it right, AND if it's the truth then that's where the power of it will come through. my 02. good luck.
Troy
HarveyBirdman
Okay, So whats the Speed of Dark?
i sure hope it was the south vietnamese.
Point E: America! F#CK YEAH! Coming again to save the motherf#ckin day yeahhhH!
LOL !! yup, it sure was. After the VC took over, that's when my parents moved to the U.S. As for cool navy stories, I have heard very many, but I can't recall any off the top of my head. Once I remember some, I'll certainly share though.
greysword
Boldly lick where no one has licked before
Please understand that I have not yet been accepted to OCS, so my suggestions may work and may not. Please use what you can and discard the rest. 
Disclaimer aside, the fact that you are (possibly) a 1st generation American from Vietnam could be a magnificent foundation for your Motivational Statement! The board members reviewing your package may have either served during that time or were probably born during that time, and have lived in the shadow of Vietnam. They may be able to relate to you because of this, and your application may serve as a positive example of their efforts.
If I may suggest, you could possibly say something about:
- How greatful you are to America, especially the US Navy, for coming to your family's aid in a time of great darkness. Also, how these actions have filled you with pride for this country and a debt you owe to the Navy. You can talk about your family's naval ties, and that they fought along side the US Navy (if they did).
- The selflessness and kindness America has shown your family have instilled positive values of what it means to honor a debt, commitment to the country, and courage to do what is right (notice mention of Navy core values). Site leadership examples of how you have given back to the community to "repay" what you have gained.
- Finally, talk about what you can offer the Navy as an officer. Be fairly specific and hit on things not covered above, such as an understanding of Asian culture, language skills, uncanny dexterity, or whatever skills others on here feel would make a solid pilot, NFO, Supply, SWO, Intel, etc officer.
Of course this needs to be brief (400 words, I think), but it could show why you want to be an officer, your leadership skills, and what the Navy gains by having you.
I wish you all the luck!
- Chris
P.S. This brings up a great opportunity to thank A4s, Catmando, and others who fought in the Vietnam War for their awesome example and service to the US. I think you set the standard high that we certainly must follow as we take the fight to the Middle East and elsewhere. Your sacrifice and efforts during such an uncertain time has given our generation the wherewithall to succeed and excel as naval officers, enlisted, and civilians alike. Thank you very much for your service!
Disclaimer aside, the fact that you are (possibly) a 1st generation American from Vietnam could be a magnificent foundation for your Motivational Statement! The board members reviewing your package may have either served during that time or were probably born during that time, and have lived in the shadow of Vietnam. They may be able to relate to you because of this, and your application may serve as a positive example of their efforts.
If I may suggest, you could possibly say something about:
- How greatful you are to America, especially the US Navy, for coming to your family's aid in a time of great darkness. Also, how these actions have filled you with pride for this country and a debt you owe to the Navy. You can talk about your family's naval ties, and that they fought along side the US Navy (if they did).
- The selflessness and kindness America has shown your family have instilled positive values of what it means to honor a debt, commitment to the country, and courage to do what is right (notice mention of Navy core values). Site leadership examples of how you have given back to the community to "repay" what you have gained.
- Finally, talk about what you can offer the Navy as an officer. Be fairly specific and hit on things not covered above, such as an understanding of Asian culture, language skills, uncanny dexterity, or whatever skills others on here feel would make a solid pilot, NFO, Supply, SWO, Intel, etc officer.
Of course this needs to be brief (400 words, I think), but it could show why you want to be an officer, your leadership skills, and what the Navy gains by having you.
I wish you all the luck!
- Chris
P.S. This brings up a great opportunity to thank A4s, Catmando, and others who fought in the Vietnam War for their awesome example and service to the US. I think you set the standard high that we certainly must follow as we take the fight to the Middle East and elsewhere. Your sacrifice and efforts during such an uncertain time has given our generation the wherewithall to succeed and excel as naval officers, enlisted, and civilians alike. Thank you very much for your service!
Thanks for the advice ! Very much appreciated. But what does 1st generation mean again? I was born in California.
Please understand that I have not yet been accepted to OCS, so my suggestions may work and may not. Please use what you can and discard the rest.
Disclaimer aside, the fact that you are (possibly) a 1st generation American from Vietnam could be a magnificent foundation for your Motivational Statement! The board members reviewing your package may have either served during that time or were probably born during that time, and have lived in the shadow of Vietnam. They may be able to relate to you because of this, and your application may serve as a positive example of their efforts.
If I may suggest, you could possibly say something about:
- How greatful you are to America, especially the US Navy, for coming to your family's aid in a time of great darkness. Also, how these actions have filled you with pride for this country and a debt you owe to the Navy. You can talk about your family's naval ties, and that they fought along side the US Navy (if they did).
- The selflessness and kindness America has shown your family have instilled positive values of what it means to honor a debt, commitment to the country, and courage to do what is right (notice mention of Navy core values). Site leadership examples of how you have given back to the community to "repay" what you have gained.
- Finally, talk about what you can offer the Navy as an officer. Be fairly specific and hit on things not covered above, such as an understanding of Asian culture, language skills, uncanny dexterity, or whatever skills others on here feel would make a solid pilot, NFO, Supply, SWO, Intel, etc officer.
Of course this needs to be brief (400 words, I think), but it could show why you want to be an officer, your leadership skills, and what the Navy gains by having you.
I wish you all the luck!
- Chris
P.S. This brings up a great opportunity to thank A4s, Catmando, and others who fought in the Vietnam War for their awesome example and service to the US. I think you set the standard high that we certainly must follow as we take the fight to the Middle East and elsewhere. Your sacrifice and efforts during such an uncertain time has given our generation the wherewithall to succeed and excel as naval officers, enlisted, and civilians alike. Thank you very much for your service!