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Would anyone be willing to critique my motivational statement?

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cefiro

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Hey guys,

I am inching closer to completing my packet for pilot, nfo, and swo but am still having a bit of trouble with my motivational statement. I have always been a pretty good creative writer, but I don't think that's what the board is looking for. Ive done my best to eliminate the fluff, but I am still not 100% happy with it.

If anyone with experience with this would be willing to tear my statement apart, I would really appreciate it. Either PM me your email address or post it in the thread.

Thanks!
 
twobecrazy

twobecrazy

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cefiro said:
Hey guys,

I am inching closer to completing my packet for pilot, nfo, and swo but am still having a bit of trouble with my motivational statement. I have always been a pretty good creative writer, but I don't think that's what the board is looking for. Ive done my best to eliminate the fluff, but I am still not 100% happy with it.

If anyone with experience with this would be willing to tear my statement apart, I would really appreciate it. Either PM me your email address or post it in the thread.

Thanks!
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If you want just post it here and I'm sure there will be several people willing to help you out.

http://www.airwarriors.com/forum/showthread.php/142053-Motivational-Statement-MEGA-Thread
 
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