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Admissions Essay Help


New Member
I just finished my essay for the Naval Academy and would like for someone to read over it and tell me what they think. All critique/commentary is welcome; the Naval Academy is my first choice so I'll gladly accept any advice that would improve my essay. I'll PM it to you if your interested, thanks in advance.


A pilot is a pilot. An NFO is something else.
Super Moderator
Send it my way man...I don't remember much from my own essay, but hopefully I can help a bit.