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I am seeking a commission in the United State Navy because I have a strong desire to serve and lead our nation's young men and women. I believe that as an officer I can exemplify the values of the United States and those of the Navy. The core values of the Navy are those that I have always based my life decisions, and hope to further instill those values in to my service and leadership. I believe my leadership abilities will benefit the Navy and contribute to my effectiveness as an officer and flight officer.
My leadership experience began in high school when I was the captain of the varsity swim team. I successfully motivated my team to place 2nd in the state in 1999, the highest placing in school history. In addition to serving as captain, I was also the sports editor for my high school yearbook staff. This publication was the winner of two national awards. These roles opened the door to leadership and helped me to realize that I enjoy and cherish leading and mentoring others. My high school experiences built a foundation of teamwork and helping to motivate others to complete tasks bestowed upon them.
During my enlisted career in the United States Army, I attained the grade of E-5, Sergeant. As an E-4, I was nominated by the company commander and First Sergeant at both of my duty stations to serve as the human resources supervisor, which is normally reserved for non-commissioned officers. As the human resources supervisor, I was responsible for five personnel and had the duty of mentoring and counseling them on a monthly basis. I was directly responsible for their personal, military, and physical development. Additionally, I managed the promotions, finance, strength management, and evaluations for approximately 200 personnel in my unit. My service in the Army gave me insight on how military leaders should conduct themselves.
In brief, becoming a naval officer is my ultimate goal. I am confident in my abilities to represent the United States and the Navy wherever my duty may take me. As an experienced military veteran, I am ready to immediately reenter service as a naval flight officer and devote my entire self to accomplishing any mission put before me.