So writing really isn't my thing. Ive written my motivational statement and hope that someone can giveme advice. I'm starting to think that I should just scratch it and start all over. Maybe I should include some memories, watching Saving Private Ryan with some vets, touring P-Cola, Norfolk. I need to have things done by Monday, So any advice is appreciated!
I am seeking a commission to the United States Navy for several reasons. I have a strong desire to serve the best country in the world, a country that has provided me with countless opportunities that I would not have had elsewhere. I am willing to do whatever it takes to serve America like so many other men and women have done before me. First, I believe that everyone needs to give back to their country, and this is my way of doing so.
Secondly, I know I have the qualities and beliefs it takes to become a great Naval Officer. Some of those qualities and beliefs I learned through athletics. Perhaps the most important of all the things I've learned is leadership. I have been on numerous teams, some with great leaders, and some with none at all. I would like to think that experiencing both types of teams has been beneficial to my leadership capabilities. I know what bad leaders are like, and I know what it takes to be a great leader. I am a firm believer in teamwork, and that one should never put him/herself before the team and its goals. Another valuable lesson I have learned is that of respect. I believe that respect is a key component of leadership. If you don't give respect, you simply will not get it, which will in turn diminish your chances of leading anyone to success. I plan on becoming a great leader by giving respect to those around me, and by always keeping the Navy's goals and ideals in mind.
Finally, I would like to serve my country so that I may honor my family. Every generation in my family (to my knowledge) has served in the United States Military. I want to be the next and I am ready for the challenge.
I am seeking a commission to the United States Navy for several reasons. I have a strong desire to serve the best country in the world, a country that has provided me with countless opportunities that I would not have had elsewhere. I am willing to do whatever it takes to serve America like so many other men and women have done before me. First, I believe that everyone needs to give back to their country, and this is my way of doing so.
Secondly, I know I have the qualities and beliefs it takes to become a great Naval Officer. Some of those qualities and beliefs I learned through athletics. Perhaps the most important of all the things I've learned is leadership. I have been on numerous teams, some with great leaders, and some with none at all. I would like to think that experiencing both types of teams has been beneficial to my leadership capabilities. I know what bad leaders are like, and I know what it takes to be a great leader. I am a firm believer in teamwork, and that one should never put him/herself before the team and its goals. Another valuable lesson I have learned is that of respect. I believe that respect is a key component of leadership. If you don't give respect, you simply will not get it, which will in turn diminish your chances of leading anyone to success. I plan on becoming a great leader by giving respect to those around me, and by always keeping the Navy's goals and ideals in mind.
Finally, I would like to serve my country so that I may honor my family. Every generation in my family (to my knowledge) has served in the United States Military. I want to be the next and I am ready for the challenge.