Andres Jose
Future F-18 pilot
I need help and advice on my essay that I will soon send to my congressmen to get my nomination for the Naval Academy. Please comment on anything I can improve.
- My interest in the military service began at a young age, I can remember listening to my father’s stories about being in the Air Force and the thrill I would get when he would mention “those crazy bunch of guys” referring to the A-10 pilots he served with.
As I grew older and investigated military life, learned of the Navy’s strong tradition and rich history, I realized my dream was not just to fly, but rather to serve as a Naval Officer and Aviator. The movie Men of Honor only further reinforced those feelings and served as great motivation.
To pursue my dream, I want to attend the finest institution of its kind which without question is the United States Naval Academy. I have always tried to set and achieve goals, taking on difficult challenges to learn more and develop myself as a person. I know this is the only way to succeed at the Naval Academy and in my future career in the Navy.
As a cadet at Valley Forge I have already been part of a military education. I have learned the basics of leadership, and how to inspire others to attain excellence through personal motivation and self-discipline. Valley Forge has instilled values I would not have found in a regular high school. It has equipped me with tools which I know will help me succeed as a Naval Officer.
After my first year in Valley Forge I returned to Puerto Rico, and attended Colegio San Ignacio de Loyola. I volunteered to provide academic assistance to disadvantaged 9-12 year old students at the Sor Isolina Ferre Center, as an assistant tutor in a classroom of six kids. These young kids came from broken homes, violent neighborhoods, and from parents with criminal backgrounds. I soon realized that these kids needed much more than academic help. They needed to be guided and listened to. I got the opportunity to play with them, talk to them individually, and to help them with their school work.
Becoming a part of their educational program, I taught them to be morally strong. I became a leader to them, and learned that to make people follow a leader, he has to show he cares about them. In the end, I felt I had motivated these kids by letting them know they could achieve anything in life if they followed the five cornerstones I had learned at Valley Forge: Academic Excellence, Physical Development, Leadership, Personal Motivation, and most importantly, Character Development. They learned from me and I learned from them. I know these principles will guide me to future success in life. These principles guide me now as I lead the cadets under my command, and I hope they will guide me when I lead future Sailors in the Navy. If given the opportunity to attend the Naval Academy, I know I will succeed.
- My interest in the military service began at a young age, I can remember listening to my father’s stories about being in the Air Force and the thrill I would get when he would mention “those crazy bunch of guys” referring to the A-10 pilots he served with.
As I grew older and investigated military life, learned of the Navy’s strong tradition and rich history, I realized my dream was not just to fly, but rather to serve as a Naval Officer and Aviator. The movie Men of Honor only further reinforced those feelings and served as great motivation.
To pursue my dream, I want to attend the finest institution of its kind which without question is the United States Naval Academy. I have always tried to set and achieve goals, taking on difficult challenges to learn more and develop myself as a person. I know this is the only way to succeed at the Naval Academy and in my future career in the Navy.
As a cadet at Valley Forge I have already been part of a military education. I have learned the basics of leadership, and how to inspire others to attain excellence through personal motivation and self-discipline. Valley Forge has instilled values I would not have found in a regular high school. It has equipped me with tools which I know will help me succeed as a Naval Officer.
After my first year in Valley Forge I returned to Puerto Rico, and attended Colegio San Ignacio de Loyola. I volunteered to provide academic assistance to disadvantaged 9-12 year old students at the Sor Isolina Ferre Center, as an assistant tutor in a classroom of six kids. These young kids came from broken homes, violent neighborhoods, and from parents with criminal backgrounds. I soon realized that these kids needed much more than academic help. They needed to be guided and listened to. I got the opportunity to play with them, talk to them individually, and to help them with their school work.
Becoming a part of their educational program, I taught them to be morally strong. I became a leader to them, and learned that to make people follow a leader, he has to show he cares about them. In the end, I felt I had motivated these kids by letting them know they could achieve anything in life if they followed the five cornerstones I had learned at Valley Forge: Academic Excellence, Physical Development, Leadership, Personal Motivation, and most importantly, Character Development. They learned from me and I learned from them. I know these principles will guide me to future success in life. These principles guide me now as I lead the cadets under my command, and I hope they will guide me when I lead future Sailors in the Navy. If given the opportunity to attend the Naval Academy, I know I will succeed.