PRarce2
Member
Morning Air Warriors,
I am trying to write my motivational statement and would like your input/critiquing of it. I did a word limit/count of the APSR and since it is limited to viewing area that is about 1300 words. I have been trying to chop the words down while trying to get my point across. I was a 13 yr 8 mo AD1(AW) before I had to get out for Enlisted Review Board (ERB).
Just so you know I have no DUI's, ARI's, failed PRT's, or stagnated evals. the only thing was a med waiver due to 70% of my calf being burned. Sorry, I have to put that out there because first comment out of peoples mouths is, what did you do wrong.
I just affiliated with the reserves back in June and am trying to go for AMDO or Surface Warfare Office because I kind of like being a GM1 and working with CRS community, now that I have experienced it. Any comments, input, and critiquing of my motivational statement are greatly appreciated!
I am trying to write my motivational statement and would like your input/critiquing of it. I did a word limit/count of the APSR and since it is limited to viewing area that is about 1300 words. I have been trying to chop the words down while trying to get my point across. I was a 13 yr 8 mo AD1(AW) before I had to get out for Enlisted Review Board (ERB).
Just so you know I have no DUI's, ARI's, failed PRT's, or stagnated evals. the only thing was a med waiver due to 70% of my calf being burned. Sorry, I have to put that out there because first comment out of peoples mouths is, what did you do wrong.
I just affiliated with the reserves back in June and am trying to go for AMDO or Surface Warfare Office because I kind of like being a GM1 and working with CRS community, now that I have experienced it. Any comments, input, and critiquing of my motivational statement are greatly appreciated!