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That is correct for fleet applicants but not for the civi side...

Holy land of the wordy... Yea, I would say you have done a 180 from your quieter days... ;).... I don't have time now to give some good constructive criticism but I should in a couple of days (hopefully)... If you haven't seen me reply send a PM reminding me to do so and I will do what I can...

Bee, Hope all is going well with you. I have been meaning to talk with you. This may sound odd but my cousin's grandfather was in a sister squadron of yours. When I went to Tampa Bay to visit her I stayed at his place. I talked to him extensively about my dreams and goals of flying in the...

No problem... My pleasure.... I don't think I noticed this until now but just one last quick thing... I would change one of the above (see bold with italics) to Naval Officer and leave the other as is.

Here is my suggestion for your conclusion... I believe my experiences have proved that I can prevail against adversity. I further desire to make significant contributions to the people and the world around me. Receiving a commission, in the United States Navy, would be the culmination of my...

Good point. Thanks again!

Thanks gentlemen I truly appreciate the advice. Is there any type ratings, etc that look better than others?

I think this flows much better and conveys your message a little better. The part in bold should be changed above. Maybe that "and" should be an "or." You could just eliminate one or the other due to difficulties saying essentially the same thing as hurdles. You forgot a sentence above that I...

Oh yea... I think mine was just less than half the limit. So it was a crunch to get my original in but then after editing I made mine really tight!:cool:

Thanks for the reply. I may end up losing my NFO FS due to my wrist so I am researching alternatives now in case Navy Med says NOGO. I will probably use ATPs fast track program if I do lose it so I can get to "The Show" a little quicker. I think the best thing is to build up time as fast as I...

No more word limit it just has to fit in the 1 page frame they give.

Sure, I'm going to break it into your paragraphs to make it quicker for the both of us... The first sentence seems awkward to me because if your, "lifelong pursuit to become a member of the United States Navy" was truly that than why are you seeking a commission when you could have easily...

How long does it take the average person to accrue enough time at a regional to apply for the majors?

Congrats to all the Pro-Recs! To everyone who didn't get selected don't give up! Keep pushing and good luck in the future!!!

You are not qualified for NFO... 31 max is the age requirement for NFO with prior service... I'm not sure about supply...

At first glance your ASTB is a little weak. You have a good GPA. You seem to have reputable (hopefully you worked for all of them in some capacity) individuals for your LORs. Make sure you do great on the rest of your application to help you offset any negatives. GOOD LUCK!

One idea is to look on the motivational statement mega thread and get an idea of what a good/bad statement sounds like. I didn't even know about this site yet when I started to write mine. I just started writing. Thought about it for about a day then wrote a little more. Edited it another day...

I told someone else this in another thread but I don't think writing a motivational statement is like writing an EVAL. Just my opinion.

I can vaguely see a similarity but I wouldn't write mine like an EVAL. In fact, I didn't write mine anything like an EVAL. An EVAL in my opinion is used to gauge performance. A motivational statement should be personal. It is a way for you to tell a board of Naval Officers several things and at...

Yes, many people get requests like this. Start off by making a list of achievements, awards, etc. That should help you get going.

Why not just have them post dated?

It depends on your statement. You should only include information that helps your statement in conveying your message. Basically you don't want to write what you think the board wants to hear. For starters this statement should be written as a response to the three questions I mentioned above...

Nobody will ever bash anyone for giving another take on these statements. In fact, the more the merrier... I don't think anyone here or in the Navy is naive enough to think the Navy expects to only get career sailors. You don't need to sound like you are wanting to be a career guy. But you...

I agree with NavyOffRec. The first time I read it that is exactly what I thought. Ravenfn89's statement tells me more about what expects the Navy will do for him versus what he will bring to the Navy and why the Navy should choose him/her. Due to this perception it is easy to make the...

Sir, I believe he is referring to CSAR (Combat Search and Rescue)...

There is a thread floating around here about it. I suggest searching for it as that will help you answer that question.

Have you taken Calculus? Otherwise using your buddies physics books from college is going to do you very little as it will be engineering based physics (also known as calculus based) and not your standard physics class.

I am using the copy you sent to me via PM and worked it here so others can add on to what I am saying if they wish. Alright so I would add something like this to begin your statement. In (insert year you joined), I decided to join the Navy as (insert rate). As I have grown in the Navy, so...

It is better. There are still some issues that I will address in depth later this afternoon. For instance you keep repeating "and" throughout your statement. Also, there is issues with the content in a couple of spots. How much more time do we have before it needs to be turned in?

I'm an unusual case. I should have been through OCS already. My OCS date has changed several times mostly because I broke my wrist and needed surgery. The Navy has put me in Starboard D until I can get released from my doctor and ultimately Navy Med. According to my OR I may lose my spot now due...

Keep it simple... OCS...

Make that 2 sir... ;)

Yes

Pretty much exactly what I was thinking... Well said!

This is obviously my opinion and please don't take it the wrong way but I didn't like your statement. There are many errors. I think the content doesn't really do you any justice. But as you said you have already submitted it and unwilling to make major changes (which I think it needs major...

Good Job! FWIW your scores were fine before... If the board is going to select you then they will be looking at more than just your scores... WHOLE PERSON CONCEPT...

Back needs to stay straight...

I am writing this VIA my phone so I am going to be very short. Remember you are writing this statement to a board of military officers so there is no need to speak to them as though they don't know what a CDI, PC, or WC Sup does. They also know the difference between a E-1 and E-5. Stuff they...

I have no clue about the other sources and signing of their commitment but I do remember signing something along the lines of what eas7888 is describing. I don't know if I would call it a "contract" but it is at the minimum "here's a head's up." I would call it an addendum as well. If memory...

I know eas7888 knows the difference but for everyone else to clarify E-5 is a PO2 not a PO1......

Is that like having badass nunchuck skills? ;)

But why?!!! ;)

Yes, it is still possible...

Sounds like I was spot on. The Navy appears to be using the AF system presently...

Yes extensions are possible. Basically you just have to get the paperwork in order so you can submit for a FS. If you want to know what that entails you can search for it but you have basically stated what is needed for a FS.

Millsra stated in post 899 on pg 36 the difference between the two. Basically you are an Alternate for FY'13 as a secondary. A primary alternate is for FY'12. Basically more waiting and after you wait you are still not guaranteed anything... However, you have a chance if someone selected is...

Primary or secondary?

LORs, interviews, and the ASTB are your only chances for a quick resubmit then based on the info above. If you want help with your statement I will be glad to help. Just post it in the motivational statement mega thread because several people will be able to assist you with it. I don't typically...

Well apparently they are holding a spot for me. I will hopefully be going at my earliest convenience once I get my cast off. I am assuming it will be the November 27th date but we all know what assuming means. My OR kinda hinted that I will be in the earliest class I can be physically ready for...

If all goes well this is the date I am hoping for as well... Probably October 30th is the date you are thinking of... There are two dates in October and I don't think they could get you into the October 9th date...