delvecchi088
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Here is what I wrote thus far for my 100 word essay required for my ocs application. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!!
There are more reasons than 100 words can disclose as to why I want to be an officer in the Marine Corps. In short, it is to make a difference for my country and the men and women I serve with. I wish to take my knowledge and life experiences to lead and inspire these individuals to be the best person and Marine that they can be despite whatever challenges they may face. The values instilled upon Marines are invaluable and are the values of which I desire to live by and lead by.
There are more reasons than 100 words can disclose as to why I want to be an officer in the Marine Corps. In short, it is to make a difference for my country and the men and women I serve with. I wish to take my knowledge and life experiences to lead and inspire these individuals to be the best person and Marine that they can be despite whatever challenges they may face. The values instilled upon Marines are invaluable and are the values of which I desire to live by and lead by.