If I were to write my main reasons for becoming an officer, it would come off as sounding very selfish. Some of the reasons include increased pay (better life for the family), oustanding job experience, better retirement pay than my enlisted retirement rate, advancement to middle to upper management positions, being involved on a broader level, having greater influence to institute change and set policy, etc. Patriotism is only a small part of me wanting to continue my service (currently AD with over 11 yrs). I don't have visions of leading my men into battle or commanding a mighty warship, though I believe I would be capable to do so. I am more interested in running the business side of the Navy as a Supply Officer (I have an MBA, also I'm too old to fly now). From what I understand about personal statements whether it be for college, the military or other employment, they want to know what "You can do for Them". This is why I am having difficulty trying to be completely honest without sounding one-way.