Need Help With a Book

[marinegrunt]

I am a fairly accomplished writer of military fiction and military science fiction. I was a Marine grunt, not a pilot, so my scifi has been Space Marines. I am switching it up with my latest new series, which is about a Navy fighter pilot (in a space fighter).

I've given one chapter to a fighter jock/carrier XO, and he helped tweak that to sound more authentic. I'd like to send chapters to a few more pilots for the same reason in creating a better sense of verismilitude. If anyone has any interest in taking a look, I would really appreciate the help.

 

[FLGUY]

First thing I thought was that you were the Terminal Lance guy. Either way, I’m sure some of the winged guys on here would be happy to help.

 

[picklesuit]

I read a good bit, feel free to hit me up. My last “Space Marine” type read was the Redemption Trilogy...not usually my genera, but I love a good book.
Pickle

 

[Renegade One]

 

[Gonzo08]

Be happy to read it. Send me a PM with info.